Scardey Student walked down the bright school hallway. He came to the classroom door and opened it to find sharp scissors flying everwhere! He had a fear of scissors, what was he going to do? He decided to walk into the classroom. As he took at least five steps he screamed and ran back out. A pair of scissors had cut some of his precious hair off! Scardey Student thought about this long and hard. Being scared of scissors negatively affects his life in SO many ways. For example, he could never cut paper again, would barely be able to do arts and crafts and lots of other fun stuff!
The next day Scardey Student was next to his friend when he pulled out a pair of scissors, Scaredy Student screamed, "GET IT AWAY!" His friend then exclaimed that scissors were not dangerous, except when you don't use them in the right way. Scardey Student nodded in agreement. He decided make his life better by learning the proper way of using them. After an hour or so he realized that they were harmless tools. Now everday he can cut paper and do arts and crafts without screaming!
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
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short but sweet!! 5/5 Exalent
ReplyDeleteSome good organization and stayed on topic. No paragraphs and not a WOW factor hook and clincher. I give you a 2.5 for organization.
ReplyDeletegood ideas but no paragraphs. I wasn't really hooked on this story.
ReplyDelete3 for organization